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©2006-2009 ~mongolShawn
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submitted this beautiful stock image, [link] that imediatly set a story in my head. I had to get it out as quickly as possible so I added it as a comment and let her know that inform her as soon as I load the finished product. So I'll let her know immediatly. Check out her stock gallery, very diverse for so small a gallery, and it's growing.
I know it's large but I wanted it legible, the poem is below.

She lay down
knowing it would be the end
wanting to let go
but hoping for a loving friend
to hear
to listen to the sound
of the weeping
the tears falling with each pound
of her lonely heart
her lonely mind playing
tricks on her
as she lay dying
wishing someone
anyone could stop the pain
in her soul
the echoes in her brain
so she lay down
wishing the pain were in her past
a final tear fell
and that would be her last.

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:iconbillyjon:
very nice my friend! really dig the poem.....Very touching! Good stuff.:clap:

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To all the world,
to all my friends,
I love you!
but I have to leave!
:iconmongolshawn:
Thanks, I try. Glad to know you liked it.

--
mongolShawn
Shawn Munguia

Fuck karma, give me 10 minutes in a dark alley.
- me
:iconhinderedlove:
I love this it's really good!!!You get a fav!

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People come in and out of your life...But I'm a one you'll never forget!


[link] invisiblechildren
:iconmongolshawn:
Thanks so much, I really appreciate it. The stock artist provided a wonderful starting point and that always makes things much easier.

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mongolShawn
Shawn Munguia

Fuck karma, give me 10 minutes in a dark alley.
- me
:icontuishimi:
Great poem, nice combo. I hope the poem is not out of experience.

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...be quick to listen, slow to speak, slow to anger...
:iconmongolshawn:
Well, as a y-chromosome holder, "she" has never applied, so that part is right out. ;)

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mongolShawn
Shawn Munguia

Fuck karma, give me 10 minutes in a dark alley.
- me
:iconredlady1610:
Very heartwrenching. How I could relate to this one lately. Such a beautiful and moving piece, great job dear.:rose:

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Life needs a control z
:icontuishimi:
Heh. You know what I meant. :P :)

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...be quick to listen, slow to speak, slow to anger...
:iconblue-letter:
nice poem :D the changing of the text color is a cool trick ^^

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40,000 Americans are injured by toilets each year
Everyone wants a place in heaven, but they don't want to believe/do/say anything to get there
The problem isnt God - its us
Love is not something that has to be perfect

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August 3, 2006
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Feb 9, 2006, 6:34:53 PM

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